One of the biggest questions for me is "Do I still need her?" Can the plot work without her?
And one of the biggest problems with this character is that she acts way too much like Emarella. I can't have carbon-copy personalities.
From one writer to another, anybody got any tips on how to get some good inspiration for tweaking a character?
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From Him, To Him